Here is my final piece of work for Project One. I wasn't sure what to change after I'd done my first draft but the more I looked at it the more I disliked it so I decided to completly change it.
I found the original one boring but when I did my first draft I made mine boring aswell so I didn't really improve on it very well. I do think it was partly down to me figuring out how to use the programme to start off with but now I think I've got my head around it. I went for colour in this piece as there wasn't a lot in the original and I've toned down the font type from my first draft as I thought it was a little too fussy and hard to read for an article.
I tracked down some more Hollister images as I found the ones that were used in the oringinal were a bit dull. I have although used two of them as I didn't want to make the article unrecognisable.
As soon as I put the logo image onto the page it all started coming together for me. I realised I wanted to match the article to the logo so I used the same colour throughout the text. The front page looks a little open with all the space but I thought it fitted in well with the tone of the nagazine as they do this a lot in the other articles. I added in extra detail with the lines to break-up empty spaces and I think it works well.
Overall I am pleased with my work as I've never done anything like this before so I think for my first attempt it's a good one.
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